Glad to see you feeding your poor neglected Blog. Geez, you'd think you'd been busy or somethin'.
On a practical note. In the line that begins, " Washes over me" A noun in front of washes might be helpful, altho' I did have fun using my imagination to supply one.
I'm a person. With lots of ideas :) Curious about how the unseen affects the seen. How we express ourselves, about how we don't. How we resist, how we fight, how we chill. My fav question is "why?", next is "how?" when doesn't matter :D
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Glad to see you feeding your poor neglected Blog. Geez, you'd think you'd been busy or somethin'.
On a practical note. In the line that begins, " Washes over me" A noun in front of washes might be helpful, altho' I did have fun using my imagination to supply one.
Good stuff, keep writing.
~Keith
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